
Monday, 8 March 2010
Final design of my front cover


Final double page spread



On the contents page you can see that the writting at the bottom of the page hasn't been aligned properly and therefore doesn't look very neat. There isn't a picture of the editor which would make it look more professional and a issue number and date haven't been included neither the name of the magazine. "CONTENTS" at the top of the page is too small, there is too much blank space around it and it looks out of place in the centre. The front cover is incomplete: there isn't a bar code or price on the page, the writting at the bottom is hard to read because of the colour its in. There isn't much information on the page to say what the magazine incluideds and therefore the targeted audience would probably not be interested in this magazine because people buy magazines on impulse most of the time and there is nothing on the magazine that draws them in apart from the image. The blank space where the wall is could be used for a list of bands and possibly festivals to draw the readers attention to the magazine.
Tuesday, 2 March 2010
Contents page - draft

Here is another draft of my contents page, i think the photograph is very striking and makes the audience feel close and intimate with the artist as she is looking straight in to the camera and ultimately at the person reading the magazine. However the yellowish background doesn't fit with my colour theme of red and black, i also feel that the front cover image is very similar to this one because they are both looking straight in to the camera and i wanted to show some contrast by capturing the artist holding different poses.
Draft for my contents page

This is my first draft for my contents page as you can see there are various problems with the layout: the letter from the editor is too small and you can't really see it let alone read it. There are different fonts of writting on the page which make the magazine look untidy. One font would be suitable as professional magazines stick to one font to make the magazine look presentable and clear. There are two photographs of the same person which overlap each other and look altogether out of place. The photograph below this is the same as the front cover and needs to be changed. "CONTENTS" is presented too far to the left and needs to be bought back across to the right slightly to make it in line with the photographs. There needs to be more contents headings so that they meet with the bottom of the photograph.

This is my first draft for my double page spread: the problem with this layout is the headline is too low down and the sub heading cuts across her forehead which isn't very pleasing to the eye. The pages are missing a date, page numbers, the name of the photographer and writter and the email address of the magazine. The quote is hard to read because the writting is too dark in some places, altogether the layout needs some tweaking before it can begin to look professional.
front cover draft

This is my first draft for my front cover: i like the enlarged image as it draws in people's attention. However the banner across the page obscures her face and looks out of place, the strapline is too dark and therefore very hard to read as is the email address across the bottom of the page. The lure is partially obscured by the colour of the writting which is a big problem as this will be one of the main reasons why someone may buy the magazine. If they can't see what they will be reading about the chances are they won't buy the magazine. It is important therefore that i make all the text clear and easy to read throughout my magazine.
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