On the contents page you can see that the writting at the bottom of the page hasn't been aligned properly and therefore doesn't look very neat. There isn't a picture of the editor which would make it look more professional and a issue number and date haven't been included neither the name of the magazine. "CONTENTS" at the top of the page is too small, there is too much blank space around it and it looks out of place in the centre. The front cover is incomplete: there isn't a bar code or price on the page, the writting at the bottom is hard to read because of the colour its in. There isn't much information on the page to say what the magazine incluideds and therefore the targeted audience would probably not be interested in this magazine because people buy magazines on impulse most of the time and there is nothing on the magazine that draws them in apart from the image. The blank space where the wall is could be used for a list of bands and possibly festivals to draw the readers attention to the magazine.