This is my first draft for my double page spread: the problem with this layout is the headline is too low down and the sub heading cuts across her forehead which isn't very pleasing to the eye. The pages are missing a date, page numbers, the name of the photographer and writter and the email address of the magazine. The quote is hard to read because the writting is too dark in some places, altogether the layout needs some tweaking before it can begin to look professional.